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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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masih kalah jauh m punyamu, aq udah naksir banget m karya2mu niXD
kok sekarang cepet banget upload gambar2 baru??
I'd say to make a prettier watermark..or at least lighten it a bit or overlay it onto the color parts of the image...its darkness is a bit distracting. Also I'd say that bottom half of the picture is fading away into the frames nicely, leading the eyes along. The top half, especially the hair of the green girl, seem to disappear all at once. If there were something in the background that's slightly visible , or have some of the hair extending a bit further to the top frame might give a better overall effect.
I'd shrink the head of both girls a little bit. Just a bit. The green girl seem to have an exceptionally long forehead..even from this angle.
But color and composition wise, I'd give top marks.
thank you so much for your comment, critic, and advice XD~
yes, the very strange part from this pic is the green girl disappear hair. When draw this pic I want to made it seen like coming into tree (I draw a tree bar as a background) but, It's look strange, so I change it, and change it until like this, and I sooo unsatisfied with the final...-____-"